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KARL KEATING'S E-LETTER

June 22, 2004

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INCLUSIVE LANGUAGE REVISITED
ENGLISH AS SHE IS WRIT
GRAMMAR GOOF AT MASS
ONE THUMB DOWN FOR OUR VOTER'S GUIDE


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Dear Friend of Catholic Answers:

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INCLUSIVITY, AGAIN

Last week I noted that intruding what is commonly called "inclusive language" in place of a traditional rendering (or just in place of standard English) can change the meaning of a sentence.

Many people want to change "men" (as in "Christ died for all men") to "men and women." The problem is that "men" means different things in the two examples. This is easy to see when you realize that if we say "Christ died for all men and women" we imply that he did not die for children.

You may have noticed that nowadays at Mass the readings from the Pauline epistles almost always begin with "brothers and sisters." A listener might get the impression that Paul used that phrase every few paragraphs in his writings.

In fact, he didn't. The phrase is the inclusive language substitute for "brothers," a word that Paul used but not remotely as often as our current lectionary might lead one to think.

In some places he and other sacred writers wrote to groups that included men and women, but in many cases their works were addressed to audiences that would have been exclusively male. This is something that drops out of the picture when inclusive language is used.

In many traditional cultures, men and women worshiped separately. Even today the most conservative Jews do not seat men and women together in the synagogue. Things would have been no less strict in the first century.

It is probable that the writers of certain books of the Bible expected their words to be read aloud in front of exclusively male congregations or groups, in which case "brothers" really meant "brothers" and not "brothers and sisters." These nuances are lost when inclusive language is imposed on a text.

In some instances the writer (Paul, for example) might write to a group of men and women. He will let the inclusive sense of "brothers" take its natural course. (The group will know whether it consists of men only or of men and women.) In other instances the writer will write to men only, in which case "brothers" will be understood by the recipients to refer to males only. Either way, "brothers" covers the situation as it really was.

If we substitute "brothers and sisters," we exclude the second possibility, which means at times we may end up falsifying history.

MY APPROACH

I try never to use inclusive language. (It really should be called "feminist language," since standard English already is inclusive when it uses "he" or "man" in the generic sense.)

Why should I? To please those to whom such usage is important? I don't see how pandering to them is doing them any favor.

Granted, when I use proper English, someone may notice and "take offense." I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings, but I am even more solicitous of other people's minds. Maybe, when I speak English As She Is Writ, a listener will start to think, "Uh, like, could my diction be wrong?"

As I see it, the problem isn't with those who use the generic "he" or "man." The problem is with those who, because of their ignorance of their own language, take offense where not only is no offense intended but where no offense is present.

Should we modify our language to mollify such people? I don't think so, since there always will be people who can't comprehend elements of their native tongue. The answer isn't to dumb down the language but to "smart up" the people. If for some reason that can't be done, the best thing is benign neglect.

LITURGICAL GRAMMAR

The English of the Mass has never been accused of elegance. I am neither a professional translator nor a poet, but I suspect that, like many others, I could work up a more accurate and euphonious translation than the one we have been using. I also could produce one that is more correct grammatically.

Since Day One of the English translation we have been subjected to the priest saying "All honor and glory is yours, Almighty Father." This isn't English. At least it's not the English that would have merited a passing grade in Miss McGillicuddy's English class.

Plural subjects require plural verbs. The line should read: "All honor and glory are yours, Almighty Father." Why hasn't this simple correction been made in three decades?

WELL, AT LEAST OUR VOTER'S GUIDE WAS MENTIONED

In its June 18 issue the "National Catholic Reporter" ran a half-page article on "Election Guides for Serious Catholics." If the headline sounds vaguely familiar, it's because our "Voter's Guide for Serious Catholics" was one of five publications or groups mentioned.

Our guide received six column inches and was introduced anecdotally: Reader Thomas Litsch said it was being distributed at Blessed Sacrament Church in Thomas, Oklahoma, and he didn't seem to like that. Of those six column inches, three were devoted to Litsch's complaints about the guide:

"There is no mention of an issue such as a lie that leads us into an unjust war, which in effect makes him [George W. Bush] a murderer of multiple thousands. They do not speak about a candidate who wants to relax the rules about pollution of the environment and call it a Clean Air Act. No mention of those who favor moving jobs to a foreign country. Of those who take millions as a CEO as their company cheats their employees and drives up the energy prices of whole states and the nation. No mention of candidates who waste money on war and have no money for universal health care."

The "Reporter" ends the mention of our guide this way: "Litsch asks: What should a truly serious Catholic do when faced by such voter's guides?"

My answer: He should read our "Voter's Guide for Serious Catholics" and learn why some issues are non-negotiable and belong in such a guide and why other issues, such as environmental and employment legislation, are not and should not.

Until next time,

Karl

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